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thought the woods

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a breyer modle silver

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this was trip to the barn i was at i love this and i haven't uploaded beryer horse stuff in a wile
Image size
2592x1944px 1.56 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot A530
Shutter Speed
1/79 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
10 mm
Date Taken
May 18, 2011, 5:57:34 PM
Sensor Size
5mm
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Ok, im not one to usually critique photography, but here goes. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

As far as vision goes, it seems that when you shot this, you may have been going, not only for fun, but something action-y. This to me, says that that white stallion(?) is jumping onto/over that rock to run into the forest. hence the title youve chosen. I think to overall look to the image is good. The only thing I can find that would look better changed, is he is a bit bright compared to the surroundings. And maybe next time you could try trimming the grass a little. be sure to cut at an angle to give it a point look, instead of flat. And maybe try taking those leaves and crumbling them up, to make the pieces more his size.

Your originality is good. Its from above, and gives the 'drama' in this image more feel. The fact that we cannot see his face, gives him a sense of mystery. Kind of reminds me of Gandalfs horse in TLOR. Also the angle you have chosen, makes it look like hes actually getting ready to disappear 'under' the tress. which is good.

The overall impact of this image is great! I can see where you may have been going with it, i believed that he was jumping/running into the forest, and it made me want to run in after him! So, as far as im concerned, you did well on this one. Shooting model animals is a good way to practice photography, so youre on the right track. Keep up the good work.